Application Letter Critique.

ST Electronics (Training & Simulation Systems) Pte Ltd
24 Ang Mo Kio Street 65
Blk D Level 4
Singapore 569061

Dear HR Manager,

I am writing to enquire whether there are any more vacancies for the position of a “Senior Associate Engineers” as advertised on Jobstreet.

The opportunity presented in this listing is very interesting, and I believe that my strong education and technical experience will make me a very competitive candidate for this position. As you will see from my enclosed CV, I was in the field of maintenance in my two years of service as an Aircraft Technician in the Republic of Singapore Air Force repairing sophisticated fighter jet systems.Coupled with the background knowledge of Electrical Engineering concepts, I have extensive knowledge of various systems that is likely essential to assist customers with technical difficulties.

The experience of spearheading and organizing events has taught me how to build strong relationships with all departments at an organization. One of my greatest strengths is the ability to work independently within a team as well as cross-team. I strive for continued excellence and I provide exceptional contributions to customer service for all customers. I am eager to implement the professional skills I have developed so far while being committed to ongoing learning. In addition, I have a range of skills from my employment experiences, including in time management, working under pressure, professional communication and presentation, and creative problem solving, which will add further value to my contribution.

In closing I welcome the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how my extensive experience and skills would benefit your organization. Thank you very much for your consideration, and I look forward to discussing the issue with you at your earliest possible convenience. You may reach me anytime at 91234567.

Yours sincerely,
Clarence Wang

Wang Sikai Clarence
91234567
  EEE_nus@hotmail.com

 

EDUCATION 
Aug 2011 - Present, National University of Singapore          

·         Candidate for Bachelor in Electrical and Electronic Engineering degree (EEE)

·       Major academic courses highlights: Wireless Communication; Computational Sensory Systems; Mechatronics & Automation

 

Jan 2007 - Nov 2008, Serangoon Junior College, Singapore     

·         Full A-Level qualification achieved.

 

Jan 2003 - Nov 2006, Anglo Chinese School (Barker Road), Singapore     

·         Full O-Level qualification achieved.

OCCUPATION 
May 2012 - June 2012, The Fullerton Hotel, Singapore
In-Room Dining Services, Food & Beverages

·          Logistical support to assist the hotel management team to serve amenities and food to hotel guests.

 

May 2012 - May 2012, Waraku Japanese Restaurant (The Central), Singapore
Waiter, Food & Beverages

·          Assisted the restaurant in the service line.

May 2011 - Aug 2011, Paya Lebar Chinese Methodist Church, Singapore                    
Youth Worker (Internship)        

·         Assistance to pastoral staff in day to day operations.

·         Ad-Hoc Projects Completed: Church School Children Camp (30 May – 1 Jun 2011), One Youth Camp (13 – 17 Jun 2011), Youth Fellowship Parents' Night, launching of Chinese Alpha and One Youth Service.

Apr 2009 - Apr 2011, Singapore Armed Forces, Republic of Singapore Air Force.

·         Vocation: Air Force Technician.

·         Daily inspection and servicing of F-16 D+ fighter jets at first line to ensure aircrafts are fit for flight.

 

COMPETENCIES & INTERESTS

Computer Skills:

·           C Programming, Assembly Language, Premiere Pro, Photoshop, Aftereffect

 

Personal Interests:

Bowling (Skills); Music (Compose)